In the module,
ES1102, the class exercises used are mainly academic writing. We are asked to
share our experiences, summarise articles and provide our responses to an
issue. These writings are being post on online blogs whereby the tutor and our
classmates have access to. Sometimes in class, we would work with different
peers to give feedback to the writing of another classmate. Our tutor would
also provide us with formal feedback and instruct us to improve our writing
based on the feedback given. As we are constantly
told to improve on our writing, it is common for one paper to have multiple drafts.
The peer evaluation used in class is beneficial to
both parties, the giver and the receiver. The feedback given to the receiver
help the individual to be aware of his or her writing mistakes and prevent the
possibility of the same mistake being made again. For those that provide feedback,
they are able to learn from the positive writing skills used by their
classmates and by evaluating others’ works, it also increase their sensitivity
to writing mistakes. For me, peer evaluation is enjoyable most of the time as I
am able to work with various ones and to learn from them. Being able to read
others’ works give me more exposure to well written works whereby I can learn
from their organisation and vocabulary. The feedback given by my tutor has also
helped me to be more coherent and clearer in my delivery of content.
Through the feedback given by my peer and tutor, I
am now more aware of my writing mistakes which helps me to look out for such
mistakes in my writings and to correct them before submitting. Some of the
things that I have learned from the exercises are consistency in usage of
tenses, parallelism and subject-verb agreement. While peer evaluation is quite
effective, there are times whereby I did not take their feedback seriously as I
did not agree entirely with the feedback given and would only correct the
mistakes if it is pointed out by my tutor. Also, when I am asked to provide
feedback, there are moments whereby I am not sure of the mistakes that I
highlighted to my peer and might feel that my feedback is of little value but
since we are paired up, it was better as I can discuss with my partner and when
they are more knowledgeable than me, they are able to guide me.
Overall, my learning experience in class has helped
in the development of my English language, by learning from my mistakes, I am
better able to convey my ideas in my writings. Through the learning process, I
hope I will continue to keep in mind the proper usage of grammar and good
writing skills to inform my future writings done in the university and the
workforce. The increased in sensitivity to writing mistakes can also help me
when I vet through my assignments.
Thank you, Anvis, for this comprehensive, well focused reflection. First you contextualize the module writing assignments and the feedback sessions well. You then focus the discussion on the value of the peer and tutor feedback, and you express your opinions on the various aspects with good clarity. It’s interesting to me that you (like many other students) have doubts about not just your own ability to critique the language use of your peers, but also you doubt some of the feedback you got on your own language use. This is normal, of course. For that reason what is most important in the process seems to be the idea that “Being able to read others’ works give me more exposure to well written works whereby I can learn from their organisation and vocabulary…” These are good insights.
ReplyDeleteI also appreciate the attention you give to how this review process might be helpful in your writing process in the future. Good luck with that, Anvis, and the best of luck as you continue your learning journey!